blog cacophony
This week's words are
parallel
bounce
mysterious
note: national poetry month is April; this is my first post of the month
mysterious wink
fleshy pink parallel bounce
too-tight bikini
mysterious glitch
parallel processor died
bounce the server, dude
why did my check bounce?
we need parallel accounts
mysterious charge
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14 comments:
I liked the second the best as i loved the way you used parallel
Though the first was very descriptive--very
And the third very true
Sorry about the syllables but I think you took them as a challenge and did very very well
Wow 3 in one! great job!
always an enjoyable read, thanks pjd
These are great - a giggle and more!
i certainly hope you are making a compilation of all of these extremely clever haikus you dash off every wednesday!!!!
My favorite was no. 2. Computer despair in a haiku ... great!
I liked them all.
I'm still laughing at the 47% of your syllables... way to figure it out exactly!
I liked the first one the best, though figure the last one resonates with too many people.
Lovely, insightful, and though provoking haiku.
I wish I was disciplined enough for forms
Liked them all, but the devil in me preferred the first.
Fun! You have a great sense of humor. Parallel accounts made me smile.
You did great with the 53%!
parallel plot
Thanks, everyone, for stopping by and for the kind words. It is a busy time, so I felt fortunate to be able to take a little time and play this week.
I can relate to #2 unfortunately too often.
Nice work on all 3.
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