April 2, 2008

haiku wednesday - April 2, 2008

This week's words are
note: national poetry month is April; this is my first post of the month

mysterious wink
fleshy pink parallel bounce
too-tight bikini

mysterious glitch
parallel processor died
bounce the server, dude

why did my check bounce?
we need parallel accounts
mysterious charge


Anonymous said...

I liked the second the best as i loved the way you used parallel
Though the first was very descriptive--very
And the third very true

Sorry about the syllables but I think you took them as a challenge and did very very well

Lucy said...

Wow 3 in one! great job!

Anonymous said...

always an enjoyable read, thanks pjd

Tumblewords: said...

These are great - a giggle and more!

paisley said...

i certainly hope you are making a compilation of all of these extremely clever haikus you dash off every wednesday!!!!

World So Wide said...

My favorite was no. 2. Computer despair in a haiku ... great!

Anonymous said...

I liked them all.

TC said...

I'm still laughing at the 47% of your syllables... way to figure it out exactly!

I liked the first one the best, though figure the last one resonates with too many people.

Anonymous said...

Lovely, insightful, and though provoking haiku.

I wish I was disciplined enough for forms

anthonynorth said...

Liked them all, but the devil in me preferred the first.

Anonymous said...

Fun! You have a great sense of humor. Parallel accounts made me smile.

gautami tripathy said...

You did great with the 53%!

parallel plot

PJD said...

Thanks, everyone, for stopping by and for the kind words. It is a busy time, so I felt fortunate to be able to take a little time and play this week.

WriterKat said...

I can relate to #2 unfortunately too often.
Nice work on all 3.