millions of voices screaming
mine is but one more
This week's words areparallelbouncemysteriousnote: national poetry month is April; this is my first post of the month
I liked the second the best as i loved the way you used parallel Though the first was very descriptive--veryAnd the third very trueSorry about the syllables but I think you took them as a challenge and did very very well
Wow 3 in one! great job!
always an enjoyable read, thanks pjd
These are great - a giggle and more!
i certainly hope you are making a compilation of all of these extremely clever haikus you dash off every wednesday!!!!
My favorite was no. 2. Computer despair in a haiku ... great!
I liked them all.
I'm still laughing at the 47% of your syllables... way to figure it out exactly!I liked the first one the best, though figure the last one resonates with too many people.
Lovely, insightful, and though provoking haiku.I wish I was disciplined enough for forms
Liked them all, but the devil in me preferred the first.
Fun! You have a great sense of humor. Parallel accounts made me smile.
You did great with the 53%!parallel plot
Thanks, everyone, for stopping by and for the kind words. It is a busy time, so I felt fortunate to be able to take a little time and play this week.
I can relate to #2 unfortunately too often. Nice work on all 3.
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