June 11, 2008

haiku wednesday - June 11, 2008

This week's words are
change
dizzy
key

Great words this week from bone. The potential in these words makes me so dizzy that I have to remember the key to my haiku and not change my approach.



give me back my key
take your dizzy slut with you
here's change for the bus


key jingles with change
you escape without my name
dizzy hotel tryst


time to change drivers
dizzy win for Obama
now take key from Bush

12 comments:

paisley said...

that second is just naughty enough to be right up my alley!!!!

pia said...

They're all great but I want the third to be true and I so hope....

Tammy said...

Dizzy is not as easy as it looks but you made it look simple. Great job!

Xinh said...

nice job!

Aerin said...

Ditto Tammy. And well done!

TC said...

These made me laugh today.

lissa said...

fun set of haikus, I like the first one

anthonynorth said...

Can't decide which is the best here. Excellent job.

gautami tripathy said...

Good ones. I can't choose!

pjd said...

I'm glad these amuse people. My wife wants me to write "real" poems, but mostly I just want to have fun.

one more believer said...

always so good!... now take the key from bush, thaz the best...

Rae Trigg said...

Your third haiku made me smile. I hope it comes true.