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This week's words are
money
tangled
understood
threat not understood
tangled in Iraq quagmire
blood for oil money
money presented
proposition understood
nude bodies tangled
tangled money mess
divorce lawyers confuse me
I understood love
March 19, 2008
haiku wednesday - March 19, 2008
threat not understood
tangled in Iraq quagmire
blood for oil money
money presented
proposition understood
nude bodies tangled
tangled money mess
divorce lawyers confuse me
I understood love
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I think the middle one was best. You could get hooked on that :-)
Although they are all good, I like the first one the best.
Actually the third made me laugh which I need because of what you said on the first--that one was great
Have to say, I have no faves - like them all!
anthony, be careful out there... :-)
jane, thanks for the comment. the first one is obviously in honor of the fifth anniversary.
pia, great to see you again... though it took me a while to understand what you meant. I finally got it, but at first I thought you meant the two were somehow connected.
every one a gem in it's own area of expertise... that last one is a kicker!!!!
i CANNOT pick a favorite because they are all fantastic. dammit.
All excellent -- as usual. All with different themes ... no. one very good.....
We're supposed to pick a favorite? I enjoyed them all.
Im a lover of the Haiku :)
I like them all. The second one, though, stands out.
pjd,
You have the gift buddy!
rel
a serious set of haikus (is haiku plural or singular?), so much in so little space.
love them! I like the 3rd best, good contrast with confuse/understood.
Perfect adore them all - you're so darn clever ;)
first for me....short and to the point! blood for oil, what has the world come to?
nteresting how you weave the words into three separate poems. For me, it created a cohesion between the three. You could even think about joining them somehow. It's interesting how the word money can be seen in so many contexts.
I like all! They tell so much!
arched architecture
Thanks again for the comments, all. I really enjoyed the diversity of all your creations as well.
spoken well, sometimes we lose sight of whaz really going on... enjoyed the diversity of money you spoke of...i liked em all...
You have an ability to say a whole lot in just seventeen syllables.
I really liked the third for its depth. Although the second--paying two girls to mudwrestle--was great, too :)
ah, bone, mud wrestling... you're the first to mention it, but I like that interpretation best of all.
I loved the last one. :)
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