February 5, 2008

haiku wednesday - February 6, 2008

This week's words are

lonely bridge, still fog
foot crests guardrail, headlights loom
a moment disturbed

two clubs? three no-trump
disturbed, divorced... still playing
lifelong bridge partners

bridge work snarls traffic
disturbed drivers in still cars
take the train next time

bridge to the future
disturbed by mud-slinging jerks
election year, STILL?!?


Anonymous said...

The second one clinches it.

I like the way the word bridge has been taken up here.

Christine Gail said...

the first is my favourite

Anonymous said...

I hope your conference went well today. I do think these are wonderful. :)



Truefaith1963 said...

The first is moody, the last made me laugh

Norma said...

bridge work snarls traffic
disturbed drivers in still cars
take the train next time

My favorite. Great work.

UL said...

Very nice ones, esp. the last one was superb. Thank you.

TC said...

Bridge partners for life even though they're divorced?!?! Wow!

Anonymous said...

I really liked the irony of your fourth...nicely done.


Linda Jacobs said...

I like the diversity here. You used bridge in so many cool ways!

Tumblewords: said...

A variety of bridges - each more clever than the last! Love them!

a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous! said...

you motivate me to speak in haikus. :)

M as in Mint said...

Variety, variety, variety! You call THESE 'useless garbage'? Well, you can call me a garbage-lover then, a useless one at that, i guess! Jokes apart, I loved your haikus. I am motivated to haiku too. I liked 'em all - yet the second one was the coolest!

Anonymous said...

I really enjoyed them--especially the part about mud slinging--too true

WriterKat said...

I love your haikus. You are very talented. As such, I awarded you an "Excellent Bloggers" award on my blog. :-)

little wing writer said...

yr 1st ku reminds me of san francisco... challenging use of words is awesome...

PJD said...

Thank you all for your comments! Sometimes these come out better than other times, but kind words are never turned away. They are valid currency here.

Bone said...

Loved the line "a moment disturbed."

The second haiku was most unique. One of those you spend a little while thinking about.

And yeah, I'm with you on the last one. Still???