February 20, 2008

haiku wednesday - February 20, 2008

This week's words are
punch
T-shirt
unravel



party punch spiked hard
Vickie in a wet T-shirt?
unravel my mind


rude T-shirt slogan
unravel your bad logic
or I'll punch your face


quittin' time, punch clock
swap coat and tie for T-shirt
unravel the day

11 comments:

Heather Kathleen said...

i like them all! where have you been weather bragger?

paisley said...

all very real.. very visual... and of course i liked them very much......

lissa said...

they're all hilarious! I like them all.

WriterKat said...

Love them. I can relate to #3 at the moment.

ChristineEldin said...

Love the last one in particular!

TC said...

The first one made me laugh - very typical male :)

pia said...

Somehow they tie together perfectly

gautami tripathy said...

I like all! No surprise there!

digging into fruit punch

pjd said...

Thanks to you all for your kind words! Now I am finally off to visit all of you!

Bone said...
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Bone said...

You have quite the knack for these. The first one garnered an out loud laugh from me.