February 27, 2008

haiku wednesday - February 28, 2008

This week's words are
apology
consider
distant



distant nightmare screams
weak corporate apology
consider your soul


distant stare, straight lips
you consider our future
apology time


distant sirens howl
consider turning me in
no apology

12 comments:

UL said...

Loved the second one.. superb. Thanks for sharing.

paisley said...

very nice trio....

tumblewords said...

Astute response to the prompt! Nice pieces!

Corina said...

Nice haikus. They work well with the prompt words.

TC said...

Hey, hey! No asking about the Roman Numerals! They come and go... which is a good thing. (I like it best when they go.)

O:)

I liked the last one the best.

Linda Jacobs said...

I'm lucky to have one decent thought involving these words. You have three great ones!

Laane said...

There great all three, but I like the second one best.

You can find my 3 words ::here::.

Have a great day!

lissa said...

I enjoy reading your haikus - well play with the 3ww words.

WriterKat said...

How do you pick a favorite. I love all three. The second one speaks volumes. The third, so simple and perfect.

LittleWing said...

sounds like a bad day in the life of sad apologies...

Amarettogirl said...

This was wonderful, delightfully concise, yet heartfelt!

Amarettogirl said...

Oh my gosh - I just realized there were three seperate pieces -duh!! ;) O.k. so obviously these were three different haikus, but if you consider my warped mind- I thought all three went together FANTASTICALLY as one! But you don't need to consider anything from my mind!