December 29, 2010

haiku wednesday - at least once (more) in 2010, by god

This week's words are buckle,  evade, wedge.

New year's resolution:  Do 3WW more times in 2011 than in 2010.  Shouldn't be hard.  This is only my second one all year.

concrete wedge plummets
foundations crack, posts buckle
no thing evades time

evade temptation
courage and resolve buckle
this new wedge splits us

hop in the car, son
wedge in close and buckle up
there's cops to evade


Unknown said...

Your second haiku is profound and evoked a true sense of sadness, loss. Amazing how intensely so few words can convey such deep meaning.

anthonynorth said...

A nice mix of haiku. Enjoyed them.

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

That last one is a little disturbing!

Rallentanda said...

Enjoyed this. Ha, especially liked
the last one!