April 29, 2009

haiku wednesday - April 29, 2009

This week's words are
opportunity
quarrel
service

A five syllable word! How exciting. I am sorry to all my 3WW friends, but work will keep me from visiting many people until at least later in the week. I hope you have a great week.



bad quarrel at home
opportunity to drink
hot bargirl service


service goes wide--OUT!
opportunity to rant
quarrel with the judge


they quarrel; I watch
he departs; she needs service...
opportunity!

16 comments:

maglomaniac said...

Well all are gud.
But the last ones wid newer opportunities;) is the 1 for me

~Harsha

gautami tripathy said...

The second one is too good!

raise the bar

JaneyV said...

It seems one man's quarrel is another's opportunity to get some.

My eyes have been opened to the world of haiku...

Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

See, I give you a tough word and you hit it out of the park. Great stuff.

Life without Clots said...

got to try that Haiku thingie.

Tumblewords: said...

These are so true, powerfully honest and particularly well honed.

SweetTalkingGuy.. said...

Nice three, hot bargirl, phew!

Anonymous said...

hot bargirl service - still reminiscing about the trip there, eh?

Word Verification (not kidding): coited

Aniket Thakkar said...

Awesome as always. But since we have self-developed this culture of picking up favorites on your blog... My pick would be the first one.

Anonymous said...

"self-developed this culture"? Alright, Aniket, now you're just showing off. ;)

Robin S. said...

It seems one man's quarrel is another's opportunity to get some.Ha! I was just waffling about picking #1 or #3 - and I usually don't read the comments first, because I don't want to be dissuaded from my own instincts, but in this case, I was lazy and read them, and Janey's made me laugh out loud.

So yea, I'm with Janey - and I love both #1 and #3, with 31 just baaaarelllly squeezing out the win.

Unknown said...

Absolutely love the third piece. Everything you need to know in a few words, painting a complete picture.

Aniket Thakkar said...

Aerin,

Pete mentioned earlier that he couldn't picture us picking favorites among them. But we always do, right? :D

And I did say WE didn't I? Wont take the blame alone. You are a partner in crime too. lol

Angel said...

I like the 3rd one best. Not a nice sentiment, but still.

Anonymous said...

i like th elast one mainly

ladygarfield said...

i like the first and the third one :)