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This week's words are
hesitate
jealous
neglect
Once more, 7 of 17 syllables accounted for. But it's all good. I love a challenge.
I neglect to act
jealous of their fame, I yearn
still I hesitate
hesitate and lose
did I neglect to tell you?
jealous that I won
hesitate, jealous
you think they neglect your needs
while she has their love
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8 comments:
Good good stuff. #1 is the one that struck me.
I like the first one as well although they all seem to have the same theme but that particular seems relatable to me
Really good - and I am a little jealous of your skill!
I like to give you a challenge, my man. And you did a great job.
so good to be back experiencing the haiku as only you can do it.... my pleasure....
Glad I clicked! You are such a master at haiku!
I love haiku, absolutely love it. And I love your first one most of all, too!
Although they're not really separable. I love the way you worked neglect, hesitate, and jealous throughout.
I like the first best.
And I don't envy your haiku skill. I look forward to read it every week.
book of myth or reality?
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