December 24, 2008

haiku wednesday - Christmas Eve edition

This week's words are

Happy holidays to all my friends and even everyone else. For your listening pleasure, here is a bit of Christmas Cheer in song. Sorry these are kinda weak... I'm in a hurry to get packed for our trip.

"please, God" they whisper
close eyes, bitter test of faith
field goal miracle

whisper a sled prayer
faith in snowstorm miracle
his sled sits idle

"like a miracle"
her lips whisper to my ear
"you were good, too, Faith"


Linda Jacobs said...

Like them all but, ooh, that last one, is exquisite!

Sarah Laurenson said...

You are the poet lariat. In a hurry, huh. Really, really good for 'in a hurry'. Have a good trip!

Happy Holidays!

ThomG said...

I really am glad when you show up on the blogroll. I, too, find that last one just plain naughty fun.

Anonymous said...

My favorite is the second haiku. Maybe that's because it is so easy to identify with that idle sled living in Alabama.

Anonymous said...

lovely haikus !!! :)

Anonymous said...

I liked the last one.

Merry Christmas!

Jeeves said...

I like all, especially the last one. Brilliant.

Melody said...

For being in a hurry you did a great job. I like all three, but especially like the last one.

Anonymous said...

Last one was my favorite also.