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This week's words are
awkward
kitchen
obsessed
perfection-obsessed
she concocts in her kitchen
awkward failed taste test
obsessed stalker lurks
awkward lunge through kitchen door
kitten and sunlight
kitchen remodel
obsessed owner, lax builder
awkward schedule slip
in kitchen I weep
awkward email left on screen
she's obsessed with him
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16 comments:
first and last for me, the first one struck close to home! Me in a nutshell! - Thanks again for sharing.
I & 3 reache me the most, final one was loaded with emotion though. Great work.
Penelope Anne
http://wannabeawritersomeday.blogspot.com/2008/01/3ww-volume-3.html
The last one is brilliant!
Never thought of haiku. I like these.
Rose
xo
I love that you managed to create four entirely different thoughts, yet each thoroughly satisfying, in such a spare form as haiku with these words. Wonderful! I love the kitten and sunlight one. :)
The second one really appeals to me especially if I'm reading the stalker is the kitten correctly.
Each of these so different and individually great, but still make a fine series!
All great haiku using this week's prompt. My, four haiku...you make me look lazy. ha ha
S
These are great! I'd be lucky just to do one! Like This Girl, I also love the kitten and sunlight one!
i'm standing up clapping! they are great! i think the last one is my favorite. :)
i think that if i have to paint? so should everyone else! or at least share in my joy!
and you are correct--a schoosh of al la orange. not alot though. it's one of the few that didn't make my eyes bleed.
who cares about cookin' when you can string words like that!!!! excellent!!!!
I liked the third one as I faced that a while back.
Great haiku!
Those do seem like they would be hard words to write a haiku with - oh who am I kidding?!?! I think every word would be :)
I like the kitten one... it caught me up.
those are soooo good...words reflect crystal clear images...we can all relate im sure one time or another...of course, last one's the best, i guess b/c it is such a surprise
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