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This week's words are
breath
scattered
tomorrow
red roses hurled, crushed
baby's breath scattered like rice
tomorrow he'll pay
final breath sears lungs
people scattered like dead twigs
no more tomorrow
kids scattered, breath held
won't find me til tomorrow
hide and seek savant
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15 comments:
Oh the first one made me so sad. Not sure why, but I couldn't help but wonder if he really deserved to pay?
really like the first one. the rice got me.
Liked the first one also
dang.. the holy trinity of kick ass haiku... very expertly done!!!!
I like the way the three words made a connection between the three haiku. Powerful stuff.
red roses hurled - I like the image of the gentle being flung. breath scattered like rice - very visual. scattered like dead twigs - ouch, this one reminds me of 9/11. hide and seek savant - oh wise one! Really like these.
Wow! Very nice haiku but I can really relate to the first one...rotten men! :*
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the images are so real....loved each one...
I come in with the 1st as my fav too... I think its the visual it paints of a scorn woman... unlike like TC, it didnt make me sad... more wonder what happened! lol
Happy 3ww
all were great! but number 3 for me! great work :)
I very much liked the first.
Nice haiku trilogy. The first one grabbed me instantly.
yep, all of them...loved them all!
Nice work! I love the playfulness of #3 and the baby's breath image of #1.
I agree. We both wrote about crushed rose!
:D
I like all!
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