blog cacophony
This week's words are
approach
bottle
smooth
smooth approach... hot score!
warm the baby bottle, dear
(should have used condoms)
please, stewardess, please
bring a bottle of smooth scotch
failed approach, frayed nerves
violent approach
jagged bottle, knife slash wild
smooth words turned ugly
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22 comments:
ooooo progressively tougher... very nice...
Very clever word play.
Laughed at the first one. Gasped at the last.
Rose
xo
from one to three you cover some wide serious ground....I vote for the first, because the third worries me a bit.
Each one of these is excellent -- each one deeper/different. I especially liked the 2nd one!!!
I think the first one is my favorite, but I liked the second as well.
great selection - clear as a bell
Thought the first was cleverly funny--yes, the third did make me gasp
i love the calvin & hobbes frame you have in the corner. it really speaks to my people.
Hi!
I have now officially come by to say, um, hi!
I like how each viewpoint is different.
I like this modern take on the haiku. What if these three were connected, on an airplane!
Thank you all for visiting and commenting! I try to visit the sites of all those who comment (except robin of course since she has none).
You certainly created stories with each one, like them all.
this is fun, fun! I couldnt stop the laughter on the first...
I love the first one! :)
And my fave lines in my 3WW this week are the same as yours :)
All contain stories. Thanks! I loved the first one!
bag and baggage
those three are great..three different worlds of emotions...
LOL then ouch! It seems the bottle tends to owies.
lots of emotions, lots to ponder over
Nice job. The first is a keeper!
BTW, have you ever heard of the book "Office Haiku"? Some really funny corporate poetry you might enjoy.
I laughed so hard at the first one. Wonder just how many people have that very thought progress in the history of life? :)
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