millions of voices screaming
mine is but one more
This week's words arerealityfanmind
Thanks Peter for the critique. I agree it breaks down a bit, but I seldom redo poems. This one I may.I love your haiku, they are right on the mark. :)Rosexo
As rose says , you haiku are very tight and apt.
Hi, I wrote a second version of my poem. If you have time, I would greatly appreciate your opinion. Rosexo
Great haiku... and three, WOW! Even a topical baseball one. So very tight with the words so connected. Well done.
I particularly enjoyed the second one. A very clever and economical use of the words. JC
i loved them,, i haven't ventured into the world of haiku's much.. you make me rethink that
Very cool haiku -- well, the second one is hot with the flames!:)
Yes, very topical on the first. Good job, PJD.Break the record. I'mSick of hearing about itTown hall meeting? Please.Could I be that blind?Then I remember Pete RoseReality hits
don't mind the steroidsBonds fan looks the other wayreality ballOh this flipping makes me ill. I wrote a post about it the other day, how I'm sooo sick of hearing about Barry Bonds and the idea that someday kids are going to look up to him and hello, Hank Aaron owes him NOTHING.Good job. Wish I could write haiku.
I love the way haikus force you to express things in so few words. You've done this very well.
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