January 16, 2008

haiku wednesday

This week's words are

she concocts in her kitchen
awkward failed taste test

obsessed stalker lurks
awkward lunge through kitchen door
kitten and sunlight

kitchen remodel
obsessed owner, lax builder
awkward schedule slip

in kitchen I weep
awkward email left on screen
she's obsessed with him


Anonymous said...

first and last for me, the first one struck close to home! Me in a nutshell! - Thanks again for sharing.

Unknown said...

I & 3 reache me the most, final one was loaded with emotion though. Great work.

Penelope Anne

Truefaith1963 said...

The last one is brilliant!

Anonymous said...

Never thought of haiku. I like these.



Anonymous said...

I love that you managed to create four entirely different thoughts, yet each thoroughly satisfying, in such a spare form as haiku with these words. Wonderful! I love the kitten and sunlight one. :)

susan said...

The second one really appeals to me especially if I'm reading the stalker is the kitten correctly.

Tumblewords: said...

Each of these so different and individually great, but still make a fine series!

Sandy said...
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Sandy said...

All great haiku using this week's prompt. My, four haiku...you make me look lazy. ha ha


Linda Jacobs said...

These are great! I'd be lucky just to do one! Like This Girl, I also love the kitten and sunlight one!

a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous! said...

i'm standing up clapping! they are great! i think the last one is my favorite. :)

a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous! said...

i think that if i have to paint? so should everyone else! or at least share in my joy!

and you are correct--a schoosh of al la orange. not alot though. it's one of the few that didn't make my eyes bleed.

paisley said...

who cares about cookin' when you can string words like that!!!! excellent!!!!

Anonymous said...

I liked the third one as I faced that a while back.

Great haiku!

TC said...

Those do seem like they would be hard words to write a haiku with - oh who am I kidding?!?! I think every word would be :)

I like the kitten one... it caught me up.

little wing writer said...

those are soooo good...words reflect crystal clear images...we can all relate im sure one time or another...of course, last one's the best, i guess b/c it is such a surprise