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This week's words areeclipse
languish
velocity
Another insane week where I beg your indulgence with nothing offered in return. I apologize, dear friends, but this week I will be unable to make the rounds. I hope that either next week or the week after I will be back to my usual form and once again be able to enjoy all the wonderful 3WW posts you create.
languish on the couch
foot's velocity inspires
butts eclipse TV
velocity girl
does not languish in sad life
she will eclipse fate
sorrows eclipse joy
dampen life's velocity
languish in the past
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11 comments:
Your third offering hit very close to home, dear friend.
during an eclipse
velocity of darness
makes shadows languish
You can't be stopped - your talent just keeps on ticking...wonderful.
Liked the 3rd one the best. Thx.
http://wordvamp.wordpress.com/2009/09/23/an-offering-for-death/
Last one was very deep.
And butt's eclipsing tv is something very true:)
~Harsha
All three are great; different uses of the same words conveying different meanings,
I like the velocity of your haiku which seldom eclipse anything or languis!
let my poemlette take you on
All of them are lovely. But the third one has the most profound and heartfelt meaning of all.
I absolutely love the word languish. And I love #2, too!
#2 reminded me of an old song... Velocity Girl, velocity girl... who the heck was that by?
I remember drawing a comic based on that song... hmmm....
The Moment Before Impact
Pretty impressed with the Haikus, the 3rd one was my favorite. Enjoyed reading them.
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