January 21, 2009

haiku wednesday - January 21, 2009

This week's words are

The post-inauguration edition! Yay! I love the word cadence.

humble silence breaks
fingernails rap loud cadence
my resolve tested

smug bitch ain't humble
tight-assed stair stepper cadence
I resolve revenge

firing squad cadence
keeps me humble in my cell
resolve to escape


ThomG said...

Second offering is dark and twisted, especially coming from you. Like them all, of course. I declare a tie with OxyJen (gotta keep it down the middle).

floreta said...

i think the first is my favorite but they're all really great! and clever.

Sherri B. said...

I loved all three, but especially the second one! Each one created a whole different mood.

Tumblewords: said...

Great job - these are not just words but stories! I can feel each one!

Anonymous said...

I like that you used resolve as the ending for all the haikus

ps. congrats on winning the ascension contest!

jjdebenedictis said...

Ooh! Very nice! I, too, especially like the middle one.

You have foiled me this time, but not the next, villain! *shakes impotent fist*

Anonymous said...

oh Wow !! loved how u used the words all 3 times ..

Anonymous said...

couldn't help put to smile at the first one, cracked up on the 2nd one and gasped at the third... an array of emotional resolve... didn't know you were tomlinson, absolutely loved your ascension story, congrats!

PJD said...

A tie? A TIE?!?


Yes, well. I demand a rematch.

Thanks, all y'all for reading and commenting. I finally got a chance to visit the other 3WW sites and enjoyed what was put forth this week.

Jeeves said...

First one is very very good!!!

Robin B. said...

Good ones, Pete. You know I have to pick, and this week, I really, really like #1.

writtenwyrdd said...

#3 especially.

gautami tripathy said...

starts subtly, hits hard..

said the spider to the fly

Anonymous said...

The last is my favorite!