January 12, 2011

haiku wednesday - memorial edition

This week's words are harmless, moist, yelp

Normally I write three haiku, with at least two of them trying to be humorous.  I wrote this one and then thought that writing two humorous ones would just not seem... you know.

yelp, bark, growl, howl, snarl
"harmless" rhetoric bites hard
moist cheeks in Tucson


fairyhedgehog said...

Good call.

It's a very effective poem.

Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

Thumbs up all around. I've decided to lighten up on the snark, especially on Twitter. Let's health this country. Now.

PJD said...

Thanks, Hedge.

Thom, thank you. I agree entirely.

Unknown said...

amazing job.

Unknown said...

welcome sharing your poems with our poetry potluck today..

you can link in 1 to 3 old poems or poems unrelated to our theme as first time participant, have fun.

you got talent, keep it up.