June 15, 2011

haiku wednesday - the writing monster edition

This week's words are grip, prefer, thread
Ooh, so much potential in these three words. But what, you ask, is the deal with that Writing Monster thing? Another writing prompt, which I encourage all of you to do. Click through that link after you breeze through the haiku today, please! B-Dot and I thank you!

tight grip on loose thread
they prefer control to peace
arms talks unravel


those who prefer love
reach out with hope in darkness
grip the unseen thread


lose your grip, cowboy
taunt life's wild rodeo bull
clowns prefer red thread

8 comments:

Christine said...

All very nice, but the last one I really enjoyed, cowboy.

Peter Dudley said...

Ha! Thanks, Christine! I will make the rounds later this week. Sorry, but that's the life of a working stiff.

Rinkly Rimes said...

I liked the feeling of the second one best.

Old Altonian said...

Three good ones, but I like the first best.

creativeintrospection said...

You clearly have a real skill with Haiku. They're light, playful and powerful. Loved it!Will check out Writing Monster too, thanks for the tip.

jaerose said...

It's always like seeing a triptych when you read your set.all special but together making up a big, pleasing picture..Jae

A Kwee Life said...

I like the second one best..."gripping the unseen thread." Holding on so tightly to what, we don't even know :-)

Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within said...

three wonderful Haikus