January 5, 2011

haiku wednesday - the new year's hangover edition

This week's words are plausible, taint, willingly

There's nothing romantic whatsoever about the word plausible.

they die, willingly
blood and tears taint the desert
threats seemed plausible

plausible future
our histories taint the night
willingly you come

willingly, I fear
don't taint my world view with facts
plausible or not


Kim Nelson said...

The first of today's three haiku is my favorite. Strong. Evocative. Relevant.

Nunee said...

Love the haiku's, you wrote to the challenge wonderfully :)

ThomG said...

So glad to have you back with 3WW. I think, for some tough words, you've done such a great job with these.

Sheilagh's Sweet Nothings said...

wow three excellent submissions love these Haikus

lalita choudhary said...

Great Haiku!! :)

Peter Dudley said...

Thanks, y'all! I am off to see what you wrote today, if I can break away from Day Job a little bit here and there. (Maybe tonight.)

Daily Panic said...

plausible has never been said to me romanticly either! Sorry, I haven't stopped by lately. It's always fun to have 3ww words playfully done with your haikus. I am always impressed with the way you make them work, it's very smart and I envy it a little. I like a short story but it's rare I can make it haiku short. :)

LeiffyV said...

Very powerful haikus, the energy with them is fantastic!