June 17, 2009

haiku wednesday - June 17, 2009

This week's words are

On the road. Airline (United/US Air) lost my luggage. Early meeting in the morning. #$%@@#$%!!!!

she's so arresting
wicked touch, rhythmic embrace
undercovers cop

water wicked through stem
arresting, rhythmic dripping
unending cycle

no rhythmic snoring
in your place, wicked silence
arresting my dreams


Americanising Desi said...

aww :) nice


Robin B. said...

Three good ones, loved the words this week - good combo.

I thought I chose #1, until I read #2. #2 it is - love the visuals, and the feeling that evoked.

Anonymous said...

the second one is my fav !!

ThomG said...

I'm not picking a favorite this week, since all three are just fab.

(sorry about the luggage. I hate air travel anymore.)

Andy Sewina said...

Yeah, nicely, I like the bit about the undercover cop!

Aniket Thakkar said...

The second one is very strong (we all love vicious cycles, don't we? :P).

But I like the wits in the first one more. :)

Tumblewords: said...

Sorry. Lost baggage - fodder for poems! Nice work, as always. I really enjoyed the second and the third is perfect. Actually, the first one is very good, as well. So. I enjoyed them all.

lissa said...

I like the last one, makes me think of a couple having a couple or something

when the musics over said...

US Scareways strikes again! Sorry about your luggage.

I like the last one in particular. But I think my wife would enjoy her dreams without my wicked snoring.

gautami tripathy said...

Did they find your luggage?

I like the last one best!

stolen from the air

Please don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited too!

Chris Eldin said...

Loved them all, as usual, but I thought the first one was particularly clever!!

(btw, read your post about your son and the physics book---very cute!!)