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This week's words are
arresting
rhythmic
wicked
On the road. Airline (United/US Air) lost my luggage. Early meeting in the morning. #$%@@#$%!!!!
she's so arresting
wicked touch, rhythmic embrace
undercovers cop
water wicked through stem
arresting, rhythmic dripping
unending cycle
no rhythmic snoring
in your place, wicked silence
arresting my dreams
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11 comments:
aww :) nice
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Three good ones, loved the words this week - good combo.
I thought I chose #1, until I read #2. #2 it is - love the visuals, and the feeling that evoked.
the second one is my fav !!
I'm not picking a favorite this week, since all three are just fab.
(sorry about the luggage. I hate air travel anymore.)
Yeah, nicely, I like the bit about the undercover cop!
The second one is very strong (we all love vicious cycles, don't we? :P).
But I like the wits in the first one more. :)
Sorry. Lost baggage - fodder for poems! Nice work, as always. I really enjoyed the second and the third is perfect. Actually, the first one is very good, as well. So. I enjoyed them all.
I like the last one, makes me think of a couple having a couple or something
US Scareways strikes again! Sorry about your luggage.
I like the last one in particular. But I think my wife would enjoy her dreams without my wicked snoring.
Did they find your luggage?
I like the last one best!
stolen from the air
Please don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited too!
Loved them all, as usual, but I thought the first one was particularly clever!!
(btw, read your post about your son and the physics book---very cute!!)
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