March 4, 2009

haiku wednesday - March 4, 2009

This week's words are
average
genuine
ramble

Skipping going to the gym today to make time for 3WW, the best. meme. ever. For those keeping score at home, I decided to take "average" as a two syllable word. I have a genuine feeling that my ramble with these words is, at best, average dreck. Blah.



genuine sunshine
ramble over dew-damped hills
average spring morning


don't just ramble on
give a genuine excuse
why the average grades?


ramble through spreadsheets
average job feeds lust for life
genuine daydreams

12 comments:

pia said...

I'm always in awe of your ability to do hiakus
i just ramble on

Don't know which I enjoyed most but I think the last kept me thinking

Fledgling Poet said...

I'm so glad I didn't 'ramble on by'...these were awesome! Loved them.

SweetTalkingGuy.. said...

I'm not keeping score, but the skills employed here are way above average.
Nicely, nicely!

Lucy said...

that middle one is similar to what I just told my son!

ThomG said...

Hey, great as always, but...the word was avenge.

Tumblewords: said...

Hey, good job - far above average dreck, far above.

Angel said...

Well, I liked the second one best, but sometimes think parents put too much pressure on kids to get better grades. It should be about doing their best, not THE best!

Pretty Me!! said...

loved all of them :D !! u r too good with haikus :)

pjd said...

Avenge? Avenge? AVENGE?!?

Oh.......

fudge.

Robin S. said...

#3 told a complete story about millions of cubicle workers. Very very cool

Robin S. said...

Phooey on avenge. Hmmmmph.

Sepiru Chris said...

Avenge yourself on
mean averages--write haiku,
we know you want to.