August 26, 2009

haiku wednesday - August 26, 2009

This week's words are

So busy today that I wrote my three haiku on the train to work... then forgot to post them. D'oh! Well, I hope I can make the rounds before the end of the week.

noise suddenly stopped
where did the kids vanish to?
hair fracture in vase

lightning fractures night
thunderous noise, whiskey rain
she'll vanish by dawn

blank radio noise
blips fracture reality
stars wink, fade, vanish...


Asleep On My Feet said...

Actually, I rather enjoyed the haiku posted on the 3ww comments page, too... wrong words, maybe, but still inspired by the same source! Great sense of humor, and excellent imagery here!

Andy Sewina said...

Nicely done! like the bit about the kids vanishing and the whiskey rain.

Robin S. said...

Good ones! I have two favorites this week- #2 and #3.

gautami tripathy said...

Love the way you do it!

Great work.

blowing over that mug of coffee

ThomG said...

I always appreciate your sense of humor and wit. Great job again, my friend.

lissa said...

I like the middle one, whiskey rain - what a great combination

Tumblewords: said...

So clever, as usual. Whiskey rain is great, noise blips fracture reality - fine lines and so very descriptive!

April Lindfors said...

I can really relate to that first one. The second and third ones, captured scenes very creatively.

A fracture in the time loop of our now

lin said...