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This week's words are
gloom
kneel
transparent
Happy 19th wedding anniversary to my wife. No, not apropos to 3WW exactly, but I figured I should say it.
hypocrites, we kneel
transparent priest prays for us
gloom of man-made church
your voice lights my gloom
thick walls dissolve, transparent
come, kneel next to me
kneel before you? ha!
your gloom and doom are all lies
transparent clothes, gone
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18 comments:
Another good trio. Enjoyed the last best. And congrats on the anniversay.
Happy anniversary and thanks for playing 3WW - 73 is a great accomplishment. No favorite this week, all are just a wonderful trio.
happy anniversary! as always, great haikus!
Clever, clever, clever! Love all three!
These were awesome...the first one especially resonated with me. Happy Anniversary to you and your wife!
I read it is the 73rd; Congrats on going for so long!!!
All 3 are great reads! Wonderful!
Three great pieces, each as good as the other.
Seventy-three 3WW! I've read you for a long time and each haiku you write is worth its weight in gold. Thank you! AND Happy Anniversary!
Happy Anniversary! The second one speaks to me, spiritually!
Happy Anniversary!
I loved the quirkiness in the rhird one. All were awesome.
nice, these haikus makes me think of marriage and anniversary, since you mention about your 19 wedding anniversary, guess my mind just takes in the things that I shouldn't
I like the last one, almost seems like one of those statements you said out loud but really don't mean
Belated happy anniversary!
I loved the first of the trio, because that is how I feel everytime I go to church.
I loved that first one. So true..
a day in a child's life
Happy Anniversary! That first haiku really resonated for me, since I've never quite understood why "the good news" is so often preached in gloomy places and with scare tactics.
Happy anniversary!!
Very nice Haikus..
all three were quite beautifully written...
the last was the best...
Thank you all for the anniversary wishes! We had a nice dinner out, then celebrated the following day with a birthday party for our older son, who just turned 13.
I hope I managed to visit all your pages this week, though I sure have a lot of cracks these days through which things tend to fall.
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