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This week's words are
drip
hypnotic
sulk
Although I didn't have a very difficult time with the words this week, "sulk" was a reluctant participant. Plus, that's one of those words that sounds funny if you say it a lot. Sulk. Sulk. Sulk. sulk sulk sulk sulk. See? (Aloof is also one of those words.)
high clouds sulk, aloof
hypnotic waves smooth lake's sand
tears drip from willow
your wine-sulk bores me
hypnotic gyrations lure
I melt, drip in pools
it's hypnotic--gross!
that drip hanging from your nose
is your sulk done yet?
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17 comments:
you always use the words so wonderfully.
And I'll check out the contest.
Oh, that last one could apply to so many of my students! Made me laugh!
All three are excellent!
The last was fun; the first my favourite - so visual.
love the phrase 'wine sulk'
Ooooh. Liked 'em all, LOVED #2.
Nicely, that drip hanging from your nose, made me laugh!
Have to vote for the last one this time, just cause it's so eeewwww.
I like the first one but didn't really care to picture someone with a runny nose - still I am always amaze how you can come up with such haikus
Great - you did it AGAIN! I love the reference to weeping willow in the first, the seduction in the second and the plea of the third!
Every one a winner!
Nice trio :) third one is as funny as it is gross!
Great use of the words in all three of them!
Very nice, especially the first one, although I found "wine-sulk" pretty captivating, too.
Wonderful.
All 3 held me.
Can't say that 1 is better dan d oder.
~Harsha
Your haiku are always so hypnotic!
dragon rider
Eek - our landlord (when I was a kid) always had a drip on the end of his nose - and he was a BAKER! Did you have to remind me of that?!
Can't do away with wine now can we? :D
yeah, what tw sez so perfectly...
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