December 19, 2007

haiku wednesday

This week's words are:
clumsy
fire
overlooked



overlooked lantern
hot time in the old town now!
fire clumsy milkmaid


overlooked nerd girl
clumsy bookworm, thick glasses
oh, she lights your fire


teen kid's clumsy fire
overlooked embers tumble
Malibu ashes

13 comments:

TC said...

I really liked the second one: nicely done! :)

Linda said...

Great haiku and a history lesson!
Very creative!

paisley said...

loved all of them the first and second are funny... and the third oh so true.....

tumblewords said...

Three stories - great work. The Malibu take is clever (scary but true).

Heather Kathleen said...

those are really great!!! each one!

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

Very neat way of bridging the years and using haiku.

Rose

xo

susan said...

nice takes, especially liked the one you left at 3ww.

rwellsrwells said...

liked them all, especially the first. About time Mrs O'Leary got a haiku!

UL said...

liked them much, thank you.

UL said...

Here's me - I do hate the current blogger settings!

UL

gautami tripathy said...

I liked the middle one best!

amnesia

Jujee said...

Three good Haikus, my favourite the last one.

LittleWing said...

so few words taken to light up the page...i really, really like these three...