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This week's words arefracture
noise
vanish
So busy today that I wrote my three haiku on the train to work... then forgot to post them. D'oh! Well, I hope I can make the rounds before the end of the week.
where did the kids vanish to?
hair fracture in vase
thunderous noise, whiskey rain
she'll vanish by dawn
blank radio noise
blips fracture reality
stars wink, fade, vanish...
Actually, I rather enjoyed the haiku posted on the 3ww comments page, too... wrong words, maybe, but still inspired by the same source! Great sense of humor, and excellent imagery here!
ReplyDeleteNicely done! like the bit about the kids vanishing and the whiskey rain.
ReplyDeleteGood ones! I have two favorites this week- #2 and #3.
ReplyDeleteLove the way you do it!
ReplyDeleteGreat work.
blowing over that mug of coffee
I always appreciate your sense of humor and wit. Great job again, my friend.
ReplyDeleteI like the middle one, whiskey rain - what a great combination
ReplyDeleteSo clever, as usual. Whiskey rain is great, noise blips fracture reality - fine lines and so very descriptive!
ReplyDeleteI can really relate to that first one. The second and third ones, captured scenes very creatively.
ReplyDeleteA fracture in the time loop of our now