April 29, 2009

haiku wednesday - April 29, 2009

This week's words are
opportunity
quarrel
service

A five syllable word! How exciting. I am sorry to all my 3WW friends, but work will keep me from visiting many people until at least later in the week. I hope you have a great week.


bad quarrel at home
opportunity to drink
hot bargirl service


service goes wide--OUT!
opportunity to rant
quarrel with the judge


they quarrel; I watch
he departs; she needs service...
opportunity!

16 comments:

  1. Well all are gud.
    But the last ones wid newer opportunities;) is the 1 for me

    ~Harsha

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  2. It seems one man's quarrel is another's opportunity to get some.

    My eyes have been opened to the world of haiku...

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  3. See, I give you a tough word and you hit it out of the park. Great stuff.

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  4. These are so true, powerfully honest and particularly well honed.

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  5. hot bargirl service - still reminiscing about the trip there, eh?

    Word Verification (not kidding): coited

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  6. Awesome as always. But since we have self-developed this culture of picking up favorites on your blog... My pick would be the first one.

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  7. "self-developed this culture"? Alright, Aniket, now you're just showing off. ;)

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  8. It seems one man's quarrel is another's opportunity to get some.Ha! I was just waffling about picking #1 or #3 - and I usually don't read the comments first, because I don't want to be dissuaded from my own instincts, but in this case, I was lazy and read them, and Janey's made me laugh out loud.

    So yea, I'm with Janey - and I love both #1 and #3, with 31 just baaaarelllly squeezing out the win.

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  9. Absolutely love the third piece. Everything you need to know in a few words, painting a complete picture.

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  10. Aerin,

    Pete mentioned earlier that he couldn't picture us picking favorites among them. But we always do, right? :D

    And I did say WE didn't I? Wont take the blame alone. You are a partner in crime too. lol

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  11. I like the 3rd one best. Not a nice sentiment, but still.

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  12. i like th elast one mainly

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  13. i like the first and the third one :)

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