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A big HAPPY BIRTHDAY to Ethan, who turns 12 years old today. Bone, you made it tough on us haikuers today... nine out of 17 syllables already accounted for, and a five-syllable word, too! And to all this week's participants: I apologize in advance if I don't get round to your sites this week. It's a wicked busy time at work. Plus, it's ETHAN'S BIRTHDAY!
order to "work late"
inappropriate touching
shortcut to lawsuit
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inappropriate for bikes
order me new tires
Loved the first one. Funny.
ReplyDeleteThe first is funny but I liked the second
ReplyDeleteHappy birthday Ethan!!! Being a Cancer is great as that means you have your birthday in true summer
My favorite this time - the third one. Ha!
ReplyDeleteAnd Happy Birthday Ethan!!!
Enjoyed all three! How's the smoke?
ReplyDeleteHB to Ethan. :)
Happy 12th B.D. to your son! Love all 3 Haikus but the first was killer!!
ReplyDeleteAre you a firefighter?? In CA?? hope you're careful out there. :)
YYEYAY! FOR BIRTHDAYS and fathers who celebrate them!!!!
ReplyDeleteI think you're the best Haiku-er I have ever read!!! (Can't tell you how many I've read, but it doesn't matter - you're certainly the best!)
I enjoyed all three too!
Happy birthday, Ethan! :)
ReplyDeleteThe third one made me laugh: it was perfect.
Love the snappy tensions mixed with dry humour in all 3 haikus! Great!
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