December 19, 2007

haiku wednesday

This week's words are:
clumsy
fire
overlooked


overlooked lantern
hot time in the old town now!
fire clumsy milkmaid

overlooked nerd girl
clumsy bookworm, thick glasses
oh, she lights your fire

teen kid's clumsy fire
overlooked embers tumble
Malibu ashes
at

13 comments:

  1. TCDecember 19, 2007 1:56 PM

    I really liked the second one: nicely done! :)

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  2. Linda JacobsDecember 19, 2007 2:31 PM

    Great haiku and a history lesson!
    Very creative!

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  3. paisleyDecember 19, 2007 2:42 PM

    loved all of them the first and second are funny... and the third oh so true.....

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  4. Tumblewords:December 19, 2007 2:55 PM

    Three stories - great work. The Malibu take is clever (scary but true).

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  5. a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!December 19, 2007 4:10 PM

    those are really great!!! each one!

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  6. AnonymousDecember 19, 2007 4:18 PM

    Very neat way of bridging the years and using haiku.

    Rose

    xo

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  7. susanDecember 20, 2007 12:39 PM

    nice takes, especially liked the one you left at 3ww.

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  8. Richard WellsDecember 20, 2007 1:08 PM

    liked them all, especially the first. About time Mrs O'Leary got a haiku!

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  9. AnonymousDecember 20, 2007 1:53 PM

    liked them much, thank you.

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  10. AnonymousDecember 20, 2007 1:54 PM

    Here's me - I do hate the current blogger settings!

    UL

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  11. gautami tripathyDecember 20, 2007 7:26 PM

    I liked the middle one best!

    amnesia

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  12. JujeeDecember 20, 2007 8:47 PM

    Three good Haikus, my favourite the last one.

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  13. little wing writerDecember 21, 2007 1:29 PM

    so few words taken to light up the page...i really, really like these three...

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