blog cacophony
This week's words are:Forgotten
Hotel
Obscure
obscure memory
her room number forgotten
hotel matchbook lost
obscure floor, bare feet
step--crunch--forgotten item
slimy roach hotel
obscure hotel tryst
"I've forgotten your name, hon."
just how I want it
the crunching of stray roaches is something i haven't encountered since the misspent days of my youth,,, living from flea bag motel to flea bag motel,,, just ahead of the rent man....
ReplyDeleteThese were very clever...the roach one made me cringe because I could picture it so perfectly in my mind! *shudder* lol
ReplyDeleteI loved the direction you went... could have done without memories of Florida and crunchy things, lol, but loved the forgotten names and room number.
ReplyDeleteYeah, the roach one was really icky. Really good but really icky.
ReplyDeleteBut it's the third one that sticks with me. In an uncomfortable way.
Thanks for sharing these!
I really like the last one. The hotel lends itself to tales of one night stands and secret rendezvous.
ReplyDeleteI liked the second one best. I could just hear that crunching sound.
ReplyDeleteI said 'ewwwwwwww!' outloud at the cockroach line.
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