tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post5231311850646587199..comments2023-09-29T03:15:20.697-07:00Comments on Corner Kick: Write Stuff Short Story Contest EntryPJDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-771347308164987092007-09-12T09:45:00.000-07:002007-09-12T09:45:00.000-07:00I'm sorry I thought I had left a comment here. I e...I'm sorry I thought I had left a comment here. I enjoyed your story and some of the images it conjured were great (yep, those mashed potatoes).Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-1486594563697339932007-09-08T06:02:00.000-07:002007-09-08T06:02:00.000-07:00The harder they fall. So many of us are two paych...The harder they fall. So many of us are two paychecks away from being in that soup kitchen. Good story.Boricua in Texashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10408201125366918838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-26108791855254832062007-09-07T22:14:00.000-07:002007-09-07T22:14:00.000-07:00i just had to let you know... this touched me so d...i just had to let you know... this touched me so deeply,, i had to post an accounting of the memory this brought very painfully, i might add,, to the fore for me tonight....<BR/><BR/>you can find it here:<BR/><BR/>http://why-paisley.com/2007/09/07/ashamed/paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-41008900089482635312007-09-07T17:20:00.000-07:002007-09-07T17:20:00.000-07:00that happened to me one day on a bus in ft lauderd...that happened to me one day on a bus in ft lauderdale,... he wasn't a business acquaintance,, a friend from the past more or less... it is indeed a weird situation......we are all just one step away... you just never know exactly which step it will be....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-27745940375028535622007-09-07T17:11:00.000-07:002007-09-07T17:11:00.000-07:00Sounds like he's starting to get what he deserves....Sounds like he's starting to get what he deserves. And definitely no double mashed potatoes for him.<BR/><BR/>Very realistic telling of the surroundings. Great descriptions.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-7108866722466103592007-09-07T09:51:00.000-07:002007-09-07T09:51:00.000-07:00"She gets double mashed potatoes because she has n..."She gets double mashed potatoes because she has no teeth.". You had me imagining....<BR/><BR/>=)Therhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00032674476317023443noreply@blogger.com