tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post2477772437261169672..comments2023-09-29T03:15:20.697-07:00Comments on Corner Kick: haiku wednesdayPJDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-50622306403763691872007-07-26T21:10:00.000-07:002007-07-26T21:10:00.000-07:00I love the way haikus force you to express things ...I love the way haikus force you to express things in so few words. You've done this very well.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02515440663113132433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-37506286426403040192007-07-26T19:30:00.000-07:002007-07-26T19:30:00.000-07:00don't mind the steroidsBonds fan looks the other w...<I>don't mind the steroids<BR/>Bonds fan looks the other way<BR/>reality ball<BR/></I><BR/><BR/>Oh this flipping makes me ill. I wrote a post about it the other day, how I'm sooo sick of hearing about Barry Bonds and the idea that someday kids are going to look up to him and hello, Hank Aaron owes him NOTHING.<BR/><BR/>Good job. Wish I could write haiku.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-28836855973609778342007-07-26T14:04:00.000-07:002007-07-26T14:04:00.000-07:00Yes, very topical on the first. Good job, PJD.Bre...Yes, very topical on the first. Good job, PJD.<BR/><BR/>Break the record. I'm<BR/>Sick of hearing about it<BR/>Town hall meeting? Please.<BR/><BR/>Could I be that blind?<BR/>Then I remember Pete Rose<BR/>Reality hitsBonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-28004494798648776842007-07-25T15:33:00.000-07:002007-07-25T15:33:00.000-07:00Very cool haiku -- well, the second one is hot wit...Very cool haiku -- well, the second one is hot with the flames!<BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-69804443006940721422007-07-25T15:22:00.000-07:002007-07-25T15:22:00.000-07:00i loved them,, i haven't ventured into the world o...i loved them,, i haven't ventured into the world of haiku's much.. you make me rethink thatpaisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-65857877739909664812007-07-25T11:41:00.000-07:002007-07-25T11:41:00.000-07:00I particularly enjoyed the second one. A very clev...I particularly enjoyed the second one. A very clever and economical use of the words. JCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-72383657793050328612007-07-25T11:40:00.000-07:002007-07-25T11:40:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-88989604871252856602007-07-25T11:39:00.000-07:002007-07-25T11:39:00.000-07:00Great haiku... and three, WOW! Even a topical bas...Great haiku... and three, WOW! Even a topical baseball one. So very tight with the words so connected. Well done.Gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09308862059975983327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-75844695779783316432007-07-25T10:14:00.000-07:002007-07-25T10:14:00.000-07:00Hi, I wrote a second version of my poem. If you ha...Hi, <BR/><BR/>I wrote a second version of my poem. If you have time, I would greatly appreciate your opinion. <BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-45010415407975850582007-07-25T08:19:00.000-07:002007-07-25T08:19:00.000-07:00As rose says , you haiku are very tight and apt.As rose says , you haiku are very tight and apt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-67921177714676548802007-07-25T07:49:00.000-07:002007-07-25T07:49:00.000-07:00Thanks Peter for the critique. I agree it breaks d...Thanks Peter for the critique. I agree it breaks down a bit, but I seldom redo poems. This one I may.<BR/><BR/>I love your haiku, they are right on the mark. :)<BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com