February 20, 2008

haiku wednesday - February 20, 2008

This week's words are
punch
T-shirt
unravel


party punch spiked hard
Vickie in a wet T-shirt?
unravel my mind

rude T-shirt slogan
unravel your bad logic
or I'll punch your face

quittin' time, punch clock
swap coat and tie for T-shirt
unravel the day
at

11 comments:

  1. a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!February 20, 2008 5:46 PM

    i like them all! where have you been weather bragger?

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  2. paisleyFebruary 20, 2008 6:42 PM

    all very real.. very visual... and of course i liked them very much......

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2008 7:12 PM

    they're all hilarious! I like them all.

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  4. WriterKatFebruary 20, 2008 8:57 PM

    Love them. I can relate to #3 at the moment.

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  5. Chris EldinFebruary 20, 2008 9:29 PM

    Love the last one in particular!

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  6. TCFebruary 21, 2008 9:55 AM

    The first one made me laugh - very typical male :)

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2008 6:01 PM

    Somehow they tie together perfectly

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2008 8:58 AM

    I like all! No surprise there!

    digging into fruit punch

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  9. PJDFebruary 22, 2008 11:14 AM

    Thanks to you all for your kind words! Now I am finally off to visit all of you!

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  10. BoneFebruary 23, 2008 3:21 PM

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  11. BoneFebruary 23, 2008 3:22 PM

    You have quite the knack for these. The first one garnered an out loud laugh from me.

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