tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post8059852151402900782..comments2023-09-29T03:15:20.697-07:00Comments on Corner Kick: haiku wednesday - February 4, 2009PJDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-67101841762085523762009-02-06T19:47:00.000-08:002009-02-06T19:47:00.000-08:00I like the third haiku best. Can almost hear the ...I like the third haiku best. Can almost hear the paper cup being crumpled.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-12735353890401135182009-02-06T19:38:00.000-08:002009-02-06T19:38:00.000-08:00for someone who had trouble with these words, you ...for someone who had trouble with these words, you cranked out some hot haikus.<BR/><BR/>when you say "illicit dentist chair games," are you referencing the dentist near here that "massaged" his female patients in order to help them relax their jaws?bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-82271560950642218012009-02-05T06:39:00.000-08:002009-02-05T06:39:00.000-08:00These were very good...the dentist one made me shu...These were very good...the dentist one made me shudder! I loved the dog one, too...lol. :~)Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-71548722618818514712009-02-05T06:32:00.000-08:002009-02-05T06:32:00.000-08:00Love the variety & the tones! Scary StoryLove the variety & the tones! <BR/><BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://the-awm.blogspot.com/2009/02/scary-story.html" REL="nofollow">Scary Story</A>M as in Minthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02737629866326152834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-63066062994665907452009-02-05T03:46:00.000-08:002009-02-05T03:46:00.000-08:00I liked the second one. Raw...dancing versesI liked the second one. Raw...<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/02/dancing-verses.html" REL="nofollow">dancing verses</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-85904113725040378362009-02-04T19:48:00.000-08:002009-02-04T19:48:00.000-08:00Hi PJD,You brought me in via your comments on OxyJ...Hi PJD,<BR/><BR/>You brought me in via your comments on OxyJen's site (EstraJen? Priceless.)<BR/><BR/>First and third are my favourites. The crumpled paper is the easy out, but you turn it around and meta-blame the dog by making the haiku about him.<BR/><BR/>That, I really like.Sepiru Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08600130405222535830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-6565700722976759222009-02-04T17:48:00.000-08:002009-02-04T17:48:00.000-08:00Good ones, Pete! (OK, yeah, I picked one. I love #...Good ones, Pete! (OK, yeah, I picked one. I love #2.)Robin B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11471528485010071521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-33743611158736865282009-02-04T17:39:00.000-08:002009-02-04T17:39:00.000-08:00And you've done justice to the words provided. In ...And you've done justice to the words provided. In fact, went above and beyond. I got a note on my car this summer from a person in my townhouse complex who couldn't talk to me face-to-face about how I scold my dogs, so the first one hit home (I peed on her doorstep - I KID!)<BR/><BR/>And as a side-note, thanks for getting Chris involved; he's just what the prompt needs - honest reads.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-48579099198824110912009-02-04T16:48:00.000-08:002009-02-04T16:48:00.000-08:00great haikus! the dentist!! was it inspired by my ...great haikus! the dentist!! was it inspired by my dentist poem from last week? haha great job!Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-89221895350752086552009-02-04T16:41:00.000-08:002009-02-04T16:41:00.000-08:00innocent dog? HILARIOUS! Thanks.innocent dog? HILARIOUS! Thanks.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-84715093436761271932009-02-04T16:20:00.000-08:002009-02-04T16:20:00.000-08:00i don't like the be reminded about dentists. inter...i don't like the be reminded about dentists. interesting that i see a lot of interpretation of crumpled note/paper/letter etc.floretahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-53099721838963329652009-02-04T15:55:00.000-08:002009-02-04T15:55:00.000-08:00Sometimes I yearn for a little purist-ism! You alw...Sometimes I yearn for a little purist-ism! You always convey full stories in your haiku - the third one is bloody real and the second, too.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-15344320799926384492009-02-04T14:30:00.000-08:002009-02-04T14:30:00.000-08:00Nicely done, even the horror at the end - I hate d...Nicely done, even the horror at the end - I hate dentists.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com