tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post5962179758171101927..comments2023-09-29T03:15:20.697-07:00Comments on Corner Kick: J is for Jim who had too many cutsPJDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-26869675609111323392008-04-16T09:32:00.000-07:002008-04-16T09:32:00.000-07:00Jane--a dozen bottles of vodka and three big bags ...Jane--a dozen bottles of vodka and three big bags of cat litter? Exactly <I>what</I> conclusions did you jump to?!?<BR/><BR/>Lissa, I agree it wasn't fair to Jim, but somehow it still suits him in a cosmic sort of sense.<BR/><BR/>Kat, I liked that line, too. Despite all the recent online advice to eliminate similes!PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-5049401809501588442008-04-15T13:16:00.000-07:002008-04-15T13:16:00.000-07:00The cats thing could really work. Jim was a likeab...The cats thing could really work. <BR/><BR/>Jim was a likeable guy. Probably of all the ones I've read so far this guy didn't deserve the end. But you told it well. I like the line "fell like a dead autumn leaf." Says a lot.WriterKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01966875820095185649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-26635814876115941122008-04-15T12:33:00.000-07:002008-04-15T12:33:00.000-07:00This one's particularly sad to me, yet even when ...This one's particularly sad to me, yet even when I knew it would end in tragedy, I still think it wasn't fair to himAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-91406900406444549502008-04-15T01:32:00.000-07:002008-04-15T01:32:00.000-07:00This one was really sad! Now I have to grieve for...This one was really sad! Now I have to grieve for Charlie and Jim. I kept hoping he'd just need a band-aid!<BR/>I know what you mean about the cats thing ... I was in the supermarket and the lady behind me was buying a dozen bottles of vodka and 3 big bags of cat litter. I know I shouldn't jump to conclusions..........JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-12580561667466667212008-04-14T20:04:00.000-07:002008-04-14T20:04:00.000-07:00I do like the idea of someone dying from having to...I do like the idea of someone dying from having too many cats, though. Seems inevitable.<BR/><BR/>Maybe I should do one final one using they symbol of the artist formerly known as Prince, or perhaps move into other alphabets.<BR/><BR/>Um... nah.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-73043927490202413252008-04-14T17:46:00.000-07:002008-04-14T17:46:00.000-07:00Jimmy McKimmy. Kevin McSnatch. Another Seussian wo...Jimmy McKimmy. Kevin McSnatch. Another Seussian work of genius. <BR/><BR/>I was confused while reading this one because I read "Jim who had too many <I>cats</I>," and I kept waiting for cats. So at the end I was like WTF? Did Pete drop the ball on this one? But no. He kicked it through the uprights.Blogless Trollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983848259551488867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-28099368833370016412008-04-14T12:58:00.000-07:002008-04-14T12:58:00.000-07:00another well done poemba-dum-bum!<I>another well done poem</I><BR/><BR/>ba-dum-bum!PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-70510404034314014972008-04-14T12:41:00.000-07:002008-04-14T12:41:00.000-07:00Poor Jim.I was trying not to get attached to him b...Poor Jim.<BR/><BR/>I was trying not to get attached to him because I knew what was coming.<BR/><BR/>pjd - you written yet another well done poem!Lilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02462216132532158200noreply@blogger.com