tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post2287221535322859225..comments2023-09-29T03:15:20.697-07:00Comments on Corner Kick: haiku wednesday - return from the wild editionPJDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-60808256517567729962011-05-06T22:23:21.549-07:002011-05-06T22:23:21.549-07:00Thin alibis hide nothing... the third was the most...Thin alibis hide nothing... the third was the most potent, but skipping grace to get eating made me smile! Nice blog, Peter! Peace, Amy Barlow Liberatore<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/07/powerful-urge/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-68932749259496444672011-05-06T19:48:47.251-07:002011-05-06T19:48:47.251-07:00'But still she dances' - just a great line...'But still she dances' - just a great line. <br />It's cool you could go three differently-themed poems from the same three words. Good job.Jess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-82331681568346969382011-05-06T11:11:12.977-07:002011-05-06T11:11:12.977-07:00Big thanks to you all! I guess consensus is I cap...Big thanks to you all! I guess consensus is I captured at least one good line out of nine this week. Better than my average! :-)<br /><br />I'm trying to get out and visit you all as well, but it's tough going. I have to earn my paychecks at SOME point after all...PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-5782776884321202572011-05-06T10:54:10.063-07:002011-05-06T10:54:10.063-07:00Peter~
The Good Husband and I were in Yosemite las...Peter~<br />The Good Husband and I were in Yosemite last fall for a week. One of the best times ever!<br />And that first poem makes me happy. I love to dance. Never been that great at it, but alway got such joy from the freedom, the expression. I'll bet that's how your aging gal feels!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-29989186060239194172011-05-06T09:58:50.221-07:002011-05-06T09:58:50.221-07:00Now, these are good haiku! Each one says so much ...Now, these are good haiku! Each one says so much more than three lines worth! Love "the jitter has left her bug"!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-88394680884289561022011-05-05T07:14:56.410-07:002011-05-05T07:14:56.410-07:00that first one was perfect.that first one was perfect.earlybirdhttp://mangetoutetc.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-61695792801117725742011-05-05T05:21:22.135-07:002011-05-05T05:21:22.135-07:00'the jitter has left her bug'..great line ...'the jitter has left her bug'..great line (as the others say)..shall have to remember that one..it seemed your three hiakus spanned the years effortlessly..gracefully even..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-48106661788166269552011-05-05T04:57:02.813-07:002011-05-05T04:57:02.813-07:00Loved them all but the last one contains so much &...Loved them all but the last one contains so much 'story'. I really enjoyed reading. :-)Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-14218933679283105962011-05-04T16:10:11.813-07:002011-05-04T16:10:11.813-07:00the jitter has left her bug Great line but all of ...the jitter has left her bug Great line but all of these are great.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-63375324690633562392011-05-04T14:16:30.671-07:002011-05-04T14:16:30.671-07:00The jitter has left her bug, my favorite line too,...The jitter has left her bug, my favorite line too, that and, forget grace, let's eat, sometimes this is necessary.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-35177124091612632942011-05-04T13:58:50.818-07:002011-05-04T13:58:50.818-07:00The jitter has left her bug. I resemble that line....The jitter has left her bug. I resemble that line.Travis Erwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09420879160702098979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-39783794299539032092011-05-04T13:29:30.917-07:002011-05-04T13:29:30.917-07:00". . .But still she dances" Good for he...". . .But still she dances" Good for her! Great use of the words.VL Sheridanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12831104283855298430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-89908924835117679162011-05-04T12:55:21.565-07:002011-05-04T12:55:21.565-07:00My favorite line "The jitter has left her bug...My favorite line "The jitter has left her bug"<br />Nice!Renhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16707254869085913114noreply@blogger.com