tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post1739406438949689288..comments2023-09-29T03:15:20.697-07:00Comments on Corner Kick: haiku wednesday - January 14, 2009PJDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-54145213728366967292009-01-20T01:30:00.000-08:002009-01-20T01:30:00.000-08:00I really loved the first one. Beautiful!I really loved the first one. Beautiful!Lenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787400183444796423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-18226601673942505752009-01-19T10:56:00.000-08:002009-01-19T10:56:00.000-08:00Thanks for visiting, y'all. (Robin, I also love t...Thanks for visiting, y'all. (Robin, I also love the word <I>tryst</I>.)<BR/><BR/>Angie, clever reply, much appreciated. Sly one, you.<BR/><BR/>missalister, interesting note. I compose three entirely separate haiku each week, intending them to be standalones. If they create a larger story for you, I am glad, but it was not my intent.<BR/><BR/>catvibe, if you mean 5-7-5, yes, I am a purist on that point as well, if for no other reason than it really pisses off the haiku literati.<BR/><BR/>Sarah, two visits for the price of one blog post! I am honored. :-)PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-8717750510437119502009-01-17T13:47:00.000-08:002009-01-17T13:47:00.000-08:00never seizes to amaze me how you put these togethe...never seizes to amaze me how you put these together so perfectly...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-81494579845868762672009-01-17T07:51:00.000-08:002009-01-17T07:51:00.000-08:00Read these the other day and loved them. Had to co...Read these the other day and loved them. Had to come back just to tell you (and read them again).Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-86692152584568266072009-01-16T17:53:00.000-08:002009-01-16T17:53:00.000-08:00I'm so glad your Haiku is actually Haiku. Thank y...I'm so glad your Haiku is actually Haiku. Thank you for your comment on my entry in the contest. I laughed outloud when I read it, and I totally agree.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-82908144703914358962009-01-14T19:26:00.000-08:002009-01-14T19:26:00.000-08:00Non-poet, non-haiku person that I am, I blended yo...Non-poet, non-haiku person that I am, I blended your three sections into one poem and found entwining, forfeiting, and trysting running the course of one love relationship whether it be trees or persons : )Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-27168975308089438252009-01-14T18:38:00.000-08:002009-01-14T18:38:00.000-08:00There is a subtle theme that entwinesyour haiku......There is a subtle theme that entwines<BR/>your haiku...three tryst-ful versions, forfeiting nothing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-52594159581464536642009-01-14T16:35:00.000-08:002009-01-14T16:35:00.000-08:00I love the word tryst.Like them all, love the firs...I love the word tryst.<BR/><BR/>Like them all, love the first!Robin B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11471528485010071521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-24989635243749590052009-01-14T11:40:00.000-08:002009-01-14T11:40:00.000-08:00Lovely reads...I especially enjoyed the first one!...Lovely reads...I especially enjoyed the first one! Very visual.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-177029288566315342009-01-14T08:05:00.000-08:002009-01-14T08:05:00.000-08:00First one is my choice!!!Simply love this.First one is my choice!!!Simply love this.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-36887828953917851642009-01-14T07:25:00.000-08:002009-01-14T07:25:00.000-08:00Another fine selection.Another fine selection.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8014482.post-57691821217209537652009-01-14T07:10:00.000-08:002009-01-14T07:10:00.000-08:00Each are very different, and very good. I believe ...Each are very different, and very good. I believe the last is my favorite.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.com