blog cacophonyThis week's words are control, flesh, razor
February already, and it's my first 3WW. Disgraceful. Hey, did you see I published my novel? It'll be available free ebook download February 17 through 19. Mark that on your calendar, ya?
mind like a razor
in my wheelchair, my one wish
give me flesh control
my wife's razor stare
can't hide the bare flesh on stage
mind control won't work
flesh peels back in strips
her razor gives me control
cold winter's murder
What a sharp mix of verses..I flitted between both sides of the knife edge..which was, yes..sharp..good to see you again..Jae
ReplyDeletewow powerful piece
ReplyDeleteJae, thanks! I think by next Wednesday we'll all be ready for a metaphor that doesn't involve razor sharp knife edges... :-)
ReplyDeleteSheilagh Lee, great to see you, thanks for coming by!
WOW!
ReplyDeleteThe same words.
The same form.
Three dramatically different scenes.
Quite masterful, Peter!
My favorite? The middle piece. I know that stare!
Three very different takes on the three words. All thought provoking and good. Last one is very disturbing but brilliantly written. Sharp as Jae says. The middle one made me smile, my husband would agree with that!
ReplyDeleteLove the Haikus, and you did great. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteKim, LOL, I think a lot of people know that stare. :-) Thanks for the kind words. I'll take "masterful" any time.
ReplyDeletedandelion girl, what a wonderful name you have! And thanks for the kind words. I will always take "brilliantly written" for sure.
Chris, thanks for the nice comment!