April 13, 2011

haiku wednesday - running-out-the-door edition

This week's words are evident, illusion, tragic
Gotta run... trying to do this in five minutes or less...
evident flirting
was my imagination
tragic illusion

his lies: evident
his success: an illusion
her dead end: tragic

no illusion here
doubt not evident madness
tragic, yes, but true
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5 comments:

  1. Sheilagh LeeApril 13, 2011 4:31 PM

    Sheialgh Lee said:I love these Hiakus. Wonderful works.

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  2. earlybirdApril 13, 2011 11:56 PM

    I think the second one is a really good use of the prompt. Succinct.

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  3. AnonymousApril 14, 2011 12:11 AM

    The second one is my favourite

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  4. Jae RoseApril 16, 2011 6:34 AM

    As Bee says the second haiku really packed a punch..a definite favourite..quite chilling in fact..Jae ;)

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  5. SylviaApril 16, 2011 4:04 PM

    First one is the story of my life...

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