January 5, 2011

haiku wednesday - the new year's hangover edition

This week's words are plausible, taint, willingly
There's nothing romantic whatsoever about the word plausible.

they die, willingly
blood and tears taint the desert
threats seemed plausible

plausible future
our histories taint the night
willingly you come

willingly, I fear
don't taint my world view with facts
plausible or not
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8 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 05, 2011 3:26 PM

    The first of today's three haiku is my favorite. Strong. Evocative. Relevant.

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  2. Lavonne January 05, 2011 4:27 PM

    Love the haiku's, you wrote to the challenge wonderfully :)

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  3. Thom GabrukiewiczJanuary 05, 2011 5:01 PM

    So glad to have you back with 3WW. I think, for some tough words, you've done such a great job with these.

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  4. Sheilagh LeeJanuary 05, 2011 6:11 PM

    wow three excellent submissions love these Haikus

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  5. Lalita SinghJanuary 05, 2011 11:23 PM

    Great Haiku!! :)

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  6. PJDJanuary 06, 2011 11:44 AM

    Thanks, y'all! I am off to see what you wrote today, if I can break away from Day Job a little bit here and there. (Maybe tonight.)

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  7. Daily PanicJanuary 06, 2011 9:20 PM

    plausible has never been said to me romanticly either! Sorry, I haven't stopped by lately. It's always fun to have 3ww words playfully done with your haikus. I am always impressed with the way you make them work, it's very smart and I envy it a little. I like a short story but it's rare I can make it haiku short. :)

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  8. LeiffyVJanuary 11, 2011 11:15 PM

    Very powerful haikus, the energy with them is fantastic!

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