January 12, 2011

haiku wednesday - memorial edition

This week's words are harmless, moist, yelp
Normally I write three haiku, with at least two of them trying to be humorous.  I wrote this one and then thought that writing two humorous ones would just not seem... you know.


yelp, bark, growl, howl, snarl
"harmless" rhetoric bites hard
moist cheeks in Tucson


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5 comments:

  1. fairyhedgehogJanuary 13, 2011 6:32 AM

    Good call.

    It's a very effective poem.

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  2. Thom GabrukiewiczJanuary 13, 2011 10:30 AM

    Thumbs up all around. I've decided to lighten up on the snark, especially on Twitter. Let's health this country. Now.

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  3. PJDJanuary 13, 2011 4:28 PM

    Thanks, Hedge.

    Thom, thank you. I agree entirely.

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2011 9:56 AM

    amazing job.

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2011 9:56 AM

    welcome sharing your poems with our poetry potluck today..

    you can link in 1 to 3 old poems or poems unrelated to our theme as first time participant, have fun.

    you got talent, keep it up.

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