September 23, 2009

haiku wednesday - September 23, 2009

This week's words are
eclipse
languish
velocity

Another insane week where I beg your indulgence with nothing offered in return. I apologize, dear friends, but this week I will be unable to make the rounds. I hope that either next week or the week after I will be back to my usual form and once again be able to enjoy all the wonderful 3WW posts you create.

languish on the couch
foot's velocity inspires
butts eclipse TV

velocity girl
does not languish in sad life
she will eclipse fate

sorrows eclipse joy
dampen life's velocity
languish in the past
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11 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczSeptember 23, 2009 7:49 AM

    Your third offering hit very close to home, dear friend.

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  2. JinksySeptember 23, 2009 9:18 AM

    during an eclipse
    velocity of darness
    makes shadows languish

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  3. Tumblewords:September 23, 2009 1:21 PM

    You can't be stopped - your talent just keeps on ticking...wonderful.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2009 3:07 PM

    Liked the 3rd one the best. Thx.

    http://wordvamp.wordpress.com/2009/09/23/an-offering-for-death/

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  5. maglomaniacSeptember 23, 2009 3:37 PM

    Last one was very deep.
    And butt's eclipsing tv is something very true:)

    ~Harsha

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  6. Anya PadyamSeptember 23, 2009 6:52 PM

    All three are great; different uses of the same words conveying different meanings,

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  7. gautami tripathySeptember 24, 2009 2:34 AM

    I like the velocity of your haiku which seldom eclipse anything or languis!

    let my poemlette take you on

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  8. lunardancerSeptember 24, 2009 2:13 PM

    All of them are lovely. But the third one has the most profound and heartfelt meaning of all.

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  9. Robin B.September 24, 2009 4:17 PM

    I absolutely love the word languish. And I love #2, too!

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2009 2:52 PM

    #2 reminded me of an old song... Velocity Girl, velocity girl... who the heck was that by?
    I remember drawing a comic based on that song... hmmm....
    The Moment Before Impact

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  11. AnonymousOctober 10, 2009 10:00 AM

    Pretty impressed with the Haikus, the 3rd one was my favorite. Enjoyed reading them.

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