September 16, 2009

haiku wednesday - September 16, 2009

This week's words are
hanky
thick
drift

My thoughts and sympathies to ThomG, the curator and flashmaster of 3WW, who lost a family member this week.


winter's chill sinks deep
thick drift builds beside her bed
toss one more hanky


thick, goopy romance
hanky-snorker film for girls
boys' minds drift outside


yellow hankie drops
thick coach chases ref, screaming
players drift to sides

8 comments:

  1. each one different. I had trouble with hanky. I like the second the best.

    ReplyDelete
  2. I like the first one, but I do think guys cry at movies too

    ReplyDelete
  3. i always come here with a thought and that is that i ll read something wow :)

    and u did it again :)


    My Three Word Wednesday

    ReplyDelete
  4. Love #2 especially, liked the "new" use of hanky in #3. Nice! I miss doing these!

    ReplyDelete
  5. The first one is fantastic. What a vivid image. :)
    Three Poems

    ReplyDelete
  6. Good stuff, Pete. #2 is the one for me. Well done.

    ReplyDelete
  7. #1 is my Fav.. excellent work

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.