June 17, 2009

haiku wednesday - June 17, 2009

This week's words are
arresting
rhythmic
wicked

On the road. Airline (United/US Air) lost my luggage. Early meeting in the morning. #$%@@#$%!!!!

she's so arresting
wicked touch, rhythmic embrace
undercovers cop

water wicked through stem
arresting, rhythmic dripping
unending cycle

no rhythmic snoring
in your place, wicked silence
arresting my dreams
at

11 comments:

  1. Americanising DesiJune 18, 2009 1:47 AM

    aww :) nice

    MY 3WW

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  2. Robin B.June 18, 2009 4:05 AM

    Three good ones, loved the words this week - good combo.

    I thought I chose #1, until I read #2. #2 it is - love the visuals, and the feeling that evoked.

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  3. AnonymousJune 18, 2009 4:10 AM

    the second one is my fav !!

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  4. Thom GabrukiewiczJune 18, 2009 6:01 AM

    I'm not picking a favorite this week, since all three are just fab.

    (sorry about the luggage. I hate air travel anymore.)

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  5. Andy SewinaJune 18, 2009 7:40 AM

    Yeah, nicely, I like the bit about the undercover cop!

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  6. Aniket ThakkarJune 18, 2009 8:48 AM

    The second one is very strong (we all love vicious cycles, don't we? :P).

    But I like the wits in the first one more. :)

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  7. Tumblewords:June 18, 2009 9:36 AM

    Sorry. Lost baggage - fodder for poems! Nice work, as always. I really enjoyed the second and the third is perfect. Actually, the first one is very good, as well. So. I enjoyed them all.

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  8. lissaJune 18, 2009 10:37 AM

    I like the last one, makes me think of a couple having a couple or something

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  9. when the musics overJune 18, 2009 6:35 PM

    US Scareways strikes again! Sorry about your luggage.

    I like the last one in particular. But I think my wife would enjoy her dreams without my wicked snoring.

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  10. gautami tripathyJune 21, 2009 7:36 PM

    Did they find your luggage?

    I like the last one best!

    stolen from the air


    Please don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited too!

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  11. Chris EldinJune 24, 2009 4:01 AM

    Loved them all, as usual, but I thought the first one was particularly clever!!

    (btw, read your post about your son and the physics book---very cute!!)

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