May 20, 2009

haiku wednesday - May 20, 2009

This week's words are
efficient
optimize
treacherous

A whole week has gone by? Holy shme. And May is half over and I've not yet done my 1,000 words for Aerin. (Though I did edit a section of about 2,500 words... does that count, Aerin?)

optimize word use
treacherous syllable count
efficient haiku

must be efficient
optimize everything now!
a treacherous slope?

no treacherous words
an efficient kind of love
you optimize me
at

11 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczMay 20, 2009 10:49 AM

    I like them all, but the first is my favorite (and I read them while participating in a call-in press conference for a Senator - three cheers for the mute button).

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  2. piaMay 20, 2009 10:50 AM

    The third is most romantic and I like romance--despite my writing but the third speaks to me most

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  3. Aniket ThakkarMay 20, 2009 11:58 AM

    Loved all of 'em. They are all so very different from one another and great in their own sense.

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  4. Tumblewords:May 20, 2009 12:47 PM

    Fine job! You never fail to amaze/amuse me with the depth and fullness of your haiku...

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  5. AnonymousMay 20, 2009 2:54 PM

    editing only merits word count with a significant enough bribe - so, nope, sorry (although you have til the end of the month to think of one)

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  6. Andy SewinaMay 20, 2009 3:31 PM

    Yeah, I think the first one says it all for me.
    Nicely!!

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  7. Robin S.May 20, 2009 4:31 PM

    Like 'em all - love the third.

    P.S. I'm glad it really is Wednesday - not 'fake Wednesday' like, um... I thought it was yesterday.

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  8. Neverending storyMay 21, 2009 1:47 AM

    Enjoyed them all, but the first one caused a smile, always a gift. Thanks.

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  9. gautami tripathyMay 21, 2009 8:42 AM

    The first one is so good!

    *grin*

    3WW: no pawns spared

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  10. Life without ClotsMay 22, 2009 7:50 AM

    geez, i am lucky to get one posted...but I am working on prolificness

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  11. AnonymousMay 23, 2009 8:29 AM

    oh so good!!! my love for haiku strengthens everyday! -Meg

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