
cadence
humble
resolve
The post-inauguration edition! Yay! I love the word cadence.
humble silence breaks
fingernails rap loud cadence
my resolve tested
smug bitch ain't humble
tight-assed stair stepper cadence
I resolve revenge
firing squad cadence
keeps me humble in my cell
resolve to escape
Second offering is dark and twisted, especially coming from you. Like them all, of course. I declare a tie with OxyJen (gotta keep it down the middle).
ReplyDeletei think the first is my favorite but they're all really great! and clever.
ReplyDeleteI loved all three, but especially the second one! Each one created a whole different mood.
ReplyDeleteGreat job - these are not just words but stories! I can feel each one!
ReplyDeleteI like that you used resolve as the ending for all the haikus
ReplyDeleteps. congrats on winning the ascension contest!
Ooh! Very nice! I, too, especially like the middle one.
ReplyDeleteYou have foiled me this time, but not the next, villain! *shakes impotent fist*
oh Wow !! loved how u used the words all 3 times ..
ReplyDeletecouldn't help put to smile at the first one, cracked up on the 2nd one and gasped at the third... an array of emotional resolve... didn't know you were tomlinson, absolutely loved your ascension story, congrats!
ReplyDeleteA tie? A TIE?!?
ReplyDeleteHmm.
Yes, well. I demand a rematch.
Thanks, all y'all for reading and commenting. I finally got a chance to visit the other 3WW sites and enjoyed what was put forth this week.
First one is very very good!!!
ReplyDeleteGood ones, Pete. You know I have to pick, and this week, I really, really like #1.
ReplyDelete#3 especially.
ReplyDeletestarts subtly, hits hard..
ReplyDeletesaid the spider to the fly
The last is my favorite!
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