December 17, 2008

haiku wednesday - December 17, 2008

This week's words are
hesitate
jealous
neglect

Once more, 7 of 17 syllables accounted for. But it's all good. I love a challenge.

I neglect to act
jealous of their fame, I yearn
still I hesitate

hesitate and lose
did I neglect to tell you?
jealous that I won

hesitate, jealous
you think they neglect your needs
while she has their love
at

8 comments:

  1. Robin B.December 17, 2008 11:47 AM

    Good good stuff. #1 is the one that struck me.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 17, 2008 1:19 PM

    I like the first one as well although they all seem to have the same theme but that particular seems relatable to me

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  3. Tumblewords:December 17, 2008 1:20 PM

    Really good - and I am a little jealous of your skill!

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  4. Thom GabrukiewiczDecember 17, 2008 4:39 PM

    I like to give you a challenge, my man. And you did a great job.

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  5. paisleyDecember 17, 2008 4:46 PM

    so good to be back experiencing the haiku as only you can do it.... my pleasure....

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  6. Linda JacobsDecember 17, 2008 6:03 PM

    Glad I clicked! You are such a master at haiku!

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  7. Spy ScribblerDecember 17, 2008 7:27 PM

    I love haiku, absolutely love it. And I love your first one most of all, too!

    Although they're not really separable. I love the way you worked neglect, hesitate, and jealous throughout.

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  8. AnonymousDecember 18, 2008 7:40 AM

    I like the first best.

    And I don't envy your haiku skill. I look forward to read it every week.

    book of myth or reality?

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