June 11, 2008

haiku wednesday - June 11, 2008

This week's words are
change
dizzy
key

Great words this week from bone. The potential in these words makes me so dizzy that I have to remember the key to my haiku and not change my approach.

give me back my key
take your dizzy slut with you
here's change for the bus

key jingles with change
you escape without my name
dizzy hotel tryst

time to change drivers
dizzy win for Obama
now take key from Bush
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12 comments:

  1. paisleyJune 11, 2008 10:08 AM

    that second is just naughty enough to be right up my alley!!!!

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  2. AnonymousJune 11, 2008 11:29 AM

    They're all great but I want the third to be true and I so hope....

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  3. Tammy BrierlyJune 11, 2008 2:00 PM

    Dizzy is not as easy as it looks but you made it look simple. Great job!

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  4. XinhJune 11, 2008 2:02 PM

    nice job!

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  5. AnonymousJune 11, 2008 3:44 PM

    Ditto Tammy. And well done!

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  6. TCJune 11, 2008 4:15 PM

    These made me laugh today.

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  7. AnonymousJune 11, 2008 7:32 PM

    fun set of haikus, I like the first one

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  8. anthonynorthJune 12, 2008 1:29 AM

    Can't decide which is the best here. Excellent job.

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  9. gautami tripathyJune 12, 2008 5:38 AM

    Good ones. I can't choose!

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  10. PJDJune 12, 2008 12:40 PM

    I'm glad these amuse people. My wife wants me to write "real" poems, but mostly I just want to have fun.

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  11. AnonymousJune 13, 2008 4:34 PM

    always so good!... now take the key from bush, thaz the best...

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  12. Rae TriggJune 13, 2008 7:58 PM

    Your third haiku made me smile. I hope it comes true.

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